- Girl looking around frantically, flinging clothes behind her, opening drawers repetitively,emptying boxes
- *Cell phone rings* she freezes then looks around more urgently then before. *ringing stops* throws hands in air in frustration
- Pushes around more clutters of clothes, paper/worksheets(grades are visible in close up) and wrappers in till she finds cell. But when she finds it she realizes that battery is missing.
- She begins frantically searching again(same shot repeated of when she is first looking around, except the scene is sped up)
Another sped up scene of her looking around (using new shots, no repeat)
- transition shot: pan of messy floor before pan up to mid shot of her talking on cell. (actor pauses after parentheses) "ayy whats up, I know I know I'm sorry"
- full shot-opening drawer, worms eye view (camera facing upward while in drawer)-looking back and forth before taking out suspicious looking zip lock bag and saying "I got it I got it, don't worry"(no pauses). scene ends when drawer is shut still in worms eyes view.
"Imma bout to leave, I just gotta write my mom a note"
Leaves bedroom to living room (still on phone)
- Takes out marker and paper.
- takes off cap with teeth and carelessly lets it fall to the floor
- close up shot of side face while writing.
- pan down to already written note: *At Marys house studying*
- ^(during shot) dialogue-"Where do you wanna meet?"
- (pauses) "alright see ya"
- With marker in hand, close up shot of reaching to grab cap,
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